I am
a Computer
Intelligent,
I will always find a solution
Endless
amounts of knowledge
Rest
in my fingertips
Versatile,
convenient, and advanced is my definition
I am
a Computer
There
is no doubt that
I am
needed in everyday life
I am
the solution
To
all of your questions
Never
underestimate my possibilities
With
every click
There
is more and more to reveal
But
it takes time and effort
For
me to show them
I am
a computer
Be
careful how you treat me
One
careless move
I am
broken
Sometimes
without hope of being restored
I am
a computer
When
used right
I am
a joy to have
But
when abused
I
will show you my wrath
With continuous efforts of getting me fixed,
I
will reach a point
Where
nothing can fix the damage
That
has been done
I am
a computer
Take
care of me
Sheryl!! That was a very excellent poem. Although it seemed like you made no mistakes I think you should add bigger vocabulary words so you can explain your point. Other than that it was a very great poem. (:
ReplyDeleteEXCELLENT DRAFT, YOU MIGHT WANT TO THINK ABOUT ADDING MORE REASONS AS TO WHY YOU ARE THE WAY YOU ARE WITH SOME THINGS THAT ARE NOT JUST ABOUT THE COMPUTER BUT MORE PERSONAL AND ABOUT YOU. ms(3+)
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