1518 Dement St.
Honolulu, HI, 96819
December 3, 2014
Costco Wholesale
525 Alakawa St
Honolulu, HI 96817
Dear Costco Administration,
For many years my family and I have valued the service provided by your company. With great variety, quality, and reasonable prices Costco is our first resort when it comes to preparing for family gatherings or shopping for our daily meals.
Recently we have been having issues with standing in long lines and seeing only a few lanes open at checkout. A few days ago my mom and I were on our way to pay for our groceries when we came across large crowds near the checkout area. We noticed that only the center lanes were open, which caused the long lines. At the same time we saw multiple lanes towards the ends that were "closed". Like most households we do our shopping on the weekends when it is most convenient considering our busy schedules. We've noticed the weekends are also the most busiest working days for this business. Since its the holiday season more families are taking frequent trips to your stores to prepare for gatherings, but that doesn't mean it's not a year round issue. I understand your workers have other tasks to do, but I feel that, especially during the weekend, more workers should be assigned to checkout to accommodate the amount of customers.
In addition, while waiting in line I have witnessed customers complaining on how they were on a tight schedule and how the lines weren't working to their favor. Like most stores, cashiers are in charge of a large portion of customer service. With that in mind I think more employees should take on the task to ensure customers an enjoyable shopping experience.
Through this all, the employees working in the open checkout lanes were very considerate and diligent. They were well-aware of the long lines and worked to the best of their ability to prevent customers from having to wait too long. With all that they do to ensure an efficient shopping experience for your customers, I do not feel they should have to work more than they have to when more lanes could easily be open.
I have no objection to your companies way of dispersing employees to different tasks, but I feel you should do a better job at allowing your customers a comfortable shopping experience by not having them wait in long lines for majority of the time.
Sincerely,
Sheryl Cheong
Sunday, December 7, 2014
Sunday, November 16, 2014
Risky Business: Final Draft
With technology evolving every blink of an eye more and more teens are seeing the need to change along with it. They may see it as a way to connect and be with their friends without actually being around them. The invention can have its perks, but for some obsessed users it can create changes in their mental, emotional, and physical health. Comparing the effects from teens spending too much time on their cell phones, it would be to their benefit to limit the use because of the sleep deprivation, bad study habits, and lacking direct social skills.
Cell phones are well known for causing sleep deprivation in teens. According to an article published in the Annenberg Digital News, radio frequency wave energy that comes from mobile phones lead to insomnia, the inability to sleep. Sleep is a vital source of energy for the coming days. In order to be alert and focused for daily tasks you must have a good night's rest. One in three teens sends more than 100 text messages a day or 3000 texts a month. Susanne Phillips, a psychologist, states that teens that use their cell phones to text are 42% more likely to sleep with their phones than teens who own phones but don't text. In most cases, adolescents sleep with their phones beneath their pillow in order to have the status of being "available". Late night messages or calls lead for those on both ends to be at lack of rest. The best way to get enough hours of sleep every night is to turn off your phone at least an hour prior to sleeping and keeping it 9 feet away in order to not be affected by radiation. Sleep is a way to rejuvenate and replenish your body for whatever the day might bring. Don't let a modern invention ruin that.
High school is a crucial time in a person's life. It's important that they do well through studying and other school work. Cell phones could be the distraction that will jeopardize a teen's performance. A research from Kent State University showed that "high frequency users" were more likely to multi-task, a habit that has already been linked to lower grades in school. In a situation where a person is studying material they find difficult they are often drawn to non-academic activities, one of them being to log on to their smartphones. Researchers say the risk is that developing brains can become more easily habituated than adult brains to constantly switching tasks – and less able to sustain attention. Concentration is key to doing well in all areas of study. It has been proven that cell phone usage is linked to GPA and anxiety. The more obsessed you are the lower your GPA and higher your anxiety. In order to improve those test scores turn off those phones and open those books.
The way in which teens communicate is changing, and not for the better. They could be surrounded by their closest friends, but still find a way to end up on their cell phone. The tiny screen has a way to ruin a relationship. Its often difficult to connect with someone on a personal level when they are distracted by their phone. The many social, instrumental, and entertainment options phones offer often draw the attention of teens from the current environment, whether they are alone or in a crowd. A study led by Scott Campbell, an assistant professor of Communication Studies, hypothesized that frequent cell phone users would be less likely to talk with strangers in public settings due to the tendency of cell phones to reduce interpersonal interactions. Teens in this generation need to experience life without constant dependence on these devices, like how their parents or grandparents grew up. They need to understand a phone is not the only way to be connected with others.
Looking at how the use of cell phones affect teens, it would be clever to limit its use because of the lack of sleep, bad study habits, and destroyed direct relationships. The introduction of these devices has changed our society for the worst, but some may argue otherwise. Parents feel safer when their teen has a phone at all times. Its a way to constantly know where they are and to be alarmed when there is an emergency. Its like a compact computer that gives teens information at their fingertips. They could use it to find information with school assignments or just curiosity. As you can see, smart phones has its good sides, but it all depends on the user. You can abuse it or you can make the best out of it. What kind of smart phone user are you?
Cell phones are well known for causing sleep deprivation in teens. According to an article published in the Annenberg Digital News, radio frequency wave energy that comes from mobile phones lead to insomnia, the inability to sleep. Sleep is a vital source of energy for the coming days. In order to be alert and focused for daily tasks you must have a good night's rest. One in three teens sends more than 100 text messages a day or 3000 texts a month. Susanne Phillips, a psychologist, states that teens that use their cell phones to text are 42% more likely to sleep with their phones than teens who own phones but don't text. In most cases, adolescents sleep with their phones beneath their pillow in order to have the status of being "available". Late night messages or calls lead for those on both ends to be at lack of rest. The best way to get enough hours of sleep every night is to turn off your phone at least an hour prior to sleeping and keeping it 9 feet away in order to not be affected by radiation. Sleep is a way to rejuvenate and replenish your body for whatever the day might bring. Don't let a modern invention ruin that.
High school is a crucial time in a person's life. It's important that they do well through studying and other school work. Cell phones could be the distraction that will jeopardize a teen's performance. A research from Kent State University showed that "high frequency users" were more likely to multi-task, a habit that has already been linked to lower grades in school. In a situation where a person is studying material they find difficult they are often drawn to non-academic activities, one of them being to log on to their smartphones. Researchers say the risk is that developing brains can become more easily habituated than adult brains to constantly switching tasks – and less able to sustain attention. Concentration is key to doing well in all areas of study. It has been proven that cell phone usage is linked to GPA and anxiety. The more obsessed you are the lower your GPA and higher your anxiety. In order to improve those test scores turn off those phones and open those books.
The way in which teens communicate is changing, and not for the better. They could be surrounded by their closest friends, but still find a way to end up on their cell phone. The tiny screen has a way to ruin a relationship. Its often difficult to connect with someone on a personal level when they are distracted by their phone. The many social, instrumental, and entertainment options phones offer often draw the attention of teens from the current environment, whether they are alone or in a crowd. A study led by Scott Campbell, an assistant professor of Communication Studies, hypothesized that frequent cell phone users would be less likely to talk with strangers in public settings due to the tendency of cell phones to reduce interpersonal interactions. Teens in this generation need to experience life without constant dependence on these devices, like how their parents or grandparents grew up. They need to understand a phone is not the only way to be connected with others.
Looking at how the use of cell phones affect teens, it would be clever to limit its use because of the lack of sleep, bad study habits, and destroyed direct relationships. The introduction of these devices has changed our society for the worst, but some may argue otherwise. Parents feel safer when their teen has a phone at all times. Its a way to constantly know where they are and to be alarmed when there is an emergency. Its like a compact computer that gives teens information at their fingertips. They could use it to find information with school assignments or just curiosity. As you can see, smart phones has its good sides, but it all depends on the user. You can abuse it or you can make the best out of it. What kind of smart phone user are you?
Sunday, November 2, 2014
Risky Business: Rough Draft
With technology evolving every blink of an eye more and more teens are seeing the need to change along with it. They may see it as a way to connect and be with their friends without actually being around them. The invention can have its perks, but for some obsessed users it can create changes in their mental, emotional, and physical health. Comparing the effects from teens spending too much time on their cell phones, it would be to their benefit to limit the use because of the sleep deprivation, bad study habits, and lacking direct social skills.
Cell phones are well known for causing sleep deprivation in teens. According to an article published in the Annenberg Digital News, radio frequency wave energy that comes from mobile phones lead to insomnia, the inability to sleep. Sleep is a vital source of energy for the coming days. In order to be alert and focused for daily tasks you must have a good night's rest. According to Science Daily, many teens develop an addiction to their cell phone and feel a group pressure to remain connected and reachable around the clock. In most cases, adolescents sleep with their phones beneath their pillow in order to have the status of being "available". Late night messages or calls lead for those on both ends to be at lack of rest. The best way to get enough hours of sleep every night is to turn off your phone at least an hour prior to sleeping and keeping it 9 feet away in order to not be affected by radiation. Sleep is a way to rejuvenate and replenish your body for whatever the day might bring. Don't let a modern invention ruin that.
High school is a crucial time in a person's life. It's important that they do well through studying and other school work. Cell phones could be the distraction that will jeopardize a teen's performance. A research from Kent State University showed that "high frequency users" were more likely to multi-task, a habit that has already been linked to lower grades in school. In a situation where a person is studying material they find difficult they are often drawn to non-academic activities, one of them being to log on to their smartphones. Researchers say the risk is that developing brains can become more easily habituated than adult brains to constantly switching tasks – and less able to sustain attention. Concentration is key to doing well in all areas of study. It has been proven that cell phone usage is linked to GPA and anxiety. The more obsessed you are the lower your GPA and higher your anxiety. In order to improve those test scores turn off those phones and open those books.
The way in which teens communicate is changing, and not for the better. They could be surrounded by their closest friends, but still find a way to end up on their cell phone. The tiny screen has a way to ruin a relationship. Its often difficult to connect with someone on a personal level when they are distracted by their phone. The many social, instrumental, and entertainment options phones offer often draw the attention of teens from the current environment, whether they are alone or in a crowd. A study led by Scott Campbell, an assistant professor of Communication Studies, hypothesized that frequent cell phone users would be less likely to talk with strangers in public settings due to the tendency of cell phones to reduce interpersonal interactions. Teens in this generation need to experience life without constant dependence on these devices, like how their parents or grandparents grew up. They need to understand a phone is not the only way to be connected with others.
Looking at how the use of cell phones affect teens, it would be clever to limit its use because of the lack of sleep, bad study habits, and destroyed direct relationships. The introduction of these devices has changed our society for the worst, but some may argue otherwise. Parents feel safer when their teen has a phone at all times. Its a way to constantly know where they are and to be alarmed when there is an emergency. Its like a compact computer that gives teens information at their fingertips. They could use it to find information with school assignments or just curiosity. As you can see, smart phones has its good sides, but it all depends on the user. You can abuse it or you can make the best out of it. What kind of smart phone user are you?
Cell phones are well known for causing sleep deprivation in teens. According to an article published in the Annenberg Digital News, radio frequency wave energy that comes from mobile phones lead to insomnia, the inability to sleep. Sleep is a vital source of energy for the coming days. In order to be alert and focused for daily tasks you must have a good night's rest. According to Science Daily, many teens develop an addiction to their cell phone and feel a group pressure to remain connected and reachable around the clock. In most cases, adolescents sleep with their phones beneath their pillow in order to have the status of being "available". Late night messages or calls lead for those on both ends to be at lack of rest. The best way to get enough hours of sleep every night is to turn off your phone at least an hour prior to sleeping and keeping it 9 feet away in order to not be affected by radiation. Sleep is a way to rejuvenate and replenish your body for whatever the day might bring. Don't let a modern invention ruin that.
High school is a crucial time in a person's life. It's important that they do well through studying and other school work. Cell phones could be the distraction that will jeopardize a teen's performance. A research from Kent State University showed that "high frequency users" were more likely to multi-task, a habit that has already been linked to lower grades in school. In a situation where a person is studying material they find difficult they are often drawn to non-academic activities, one of them being to log on to their smartphones. Researchers say the risk is that developing brains can become more easily habituated than adult brains to constantly switching tasks – and less able to sustain attention. Concentration is key to doing well in all areas of study. It has been proven that cell phone usage is linked to GPA and anxiety. The more obsessed you are the lower your GPA and higher your anxiety. In order to improve those test scores turn off those phones and open those books.
The way in which teens communicate is changing, and not for the better. They could be surrounded by their closest friends, but still find a way to end up on their cell phone. The tiny screen has a way to ruin a relationship. Its often difficult to connect with someone on a personal level when they are distracted by their phone. The many social, instrumental, and entertainment options phones offer often draw the attention of teens from the current environment, whether they are alone or in a crowd. A study led by Scott Campbell, an assistant professor of Communication Studies, hypothesized that frequent cell phone users would be less likely to talk with strangers in public settings due to the tendency of cell phones to reduce interpersonal interactions. Teens in this generation need to experience life without constant dependence on these devices, like how their parents or grandparents grew up. They need to understand a phone is not the only way to be connected with others.
Looking at how the use of cell phones affect teens, it would be clever to limit its use because of the lack of sleep, bad study habits, and destroyed direct relationships. The introduction of these devices has changed our society for the worst, but some may argue otherwise. Parents feel safer when their teen has a phone at all times. Its a way to constantly know where they are and to be alarmed when there is an emergency. Its like a compact computer that gives teens information at their fingertips. They could use it to find information with school assignments or just curiosity. As you can see, smart phones has its good sides, but it all depends on the user. You can abuse it or you can make the best out of it. What kind of smart phone user are you?
Monday, September 22, 2014
UC Berkley Essay: FINAL
Describe the world you came from – for example, your family, community or school – and tell us how your world shaped your dreams and aspirations.
Knowing my parents moved to the United States from China, unfamiliar with the culture and language, I had a feeling it would affect me in all ways possible. They taught my brothers and I everything within their range of knowledge, for example, Chinese traditions, manners, etc. However, in areas dealing with the English language or anything American, it was just so out of their reach. I wished I could have been more exposed to things outside of their comfort zone, but it was hard. After all, I was raised as if I was born in China because that is what my parents grew up in. That did not prepare me for life in the United States. I lacked certain skills that most kids are taught at an instant. Do not get me wrong. I valued the cultural traditions, manners, and language they taught me. It helped me develop pride and respect towards my ethnicity. In the end, I appreciate what they had to offer, but in most cases it just was not enough.
When it came to school it was a dreadful six hours of my day. Immediately, I was behind from most of my classmates, being required to take special classes to help me improve my English. They were not to my liking and separated me from my friends. The feeling of being left out lingered for a while. Instead of allowing my emotions to get to me I was encouraged to work harder to overcome this obstacle. My parents were never strict in making sure I get my work done or that I get straight-A's. One of the reasons was because they did not have the knowledge to guide me like they wanted to. Instead they sort of just let me take care of what I needed to do and be in charge of my own learning. They thought that without pressuring me I would become the person I would want to be. Someone they would be proud to call their daughter. In a short period of time I was told I could return to my normal classes because I reached the same level of knowledge as those the same age as myself. Within a few months I was able to accomplish something others take years to overcome. Soon enough I was one of the top students in my grade. I could not be any more ecstatic. This was the event that really jump-started me being confident in myself. It made me realize I was capable of great things as long as I had a great desire to.
Nonetheless, I was constantly being underestimated, even with my own aunties, uncles, and cousins. They knew the conditions I grew up in, so they created false accusations to bring me down. I would often tell them the life I fantasize about when I become an adult. Describing my dream car, house, job and so much more. I needed them to support me through my future plans, but that was not always the case. They would begin by saying how I was stupid enough to think it will ever happen and how I was not fit to carryout that lifestyle. Sometimes it was not as direct as that, but I knew they were thinking something along those lines. Their comments did not benefit me in any way, but bring me to tears unnecessarily. I knew I was not what they described me as and I showed that in my elementary years. I wanted to accomplish something beyond their standards of me to really prove them wrong. Whenever I heard a negative comment anger would rush inside me, trying to hold back and not explode. I did not want them to know how I actually felt. Instead, I put all that energy to my studies. For them to see me excel is all I ever wanted.
They underestimated me, my own family. That is something I never expected from the people I loved. Regardless what they said, I could not let it get the best of me. I took their negative comments and used it as an opportunity to for them to see me improve. I had to begin with English, the basis of everything. Everyday, whether it was before or once I got home from school, I would spend hours watching TV, and not just for fun or to get away with not doing homework, but to listen and comprehend what they were saying. Educational shows on Disney, Nikelodeon, and PBS is what I lived off of. It might not seem like much, but believe it or not, it gave me the knowledge to learn an entire language on my own. That's something I never thought I was ever capable of. Of course that is not all I did. I took initiative everywhere I went. Starting conversations with others was how I applied what I learned to the real world. This went on until I reached a point where everything about the language became second nature. I was determined. And when I am determined I do not back down until what I want is fulfilled. At an early age I set goals for myself. Goals that seemed quite extreme, but were necessary in my situation. Over the years, the negativity I received no longer bothers me. I found a way to block it out and move on with my life.
My parents did not give me enough of what I needed in life, like social skills, knowledge about American customs, or the language, but I could not blame them. All I could do was make the best of it and learn from my experiences. As the years went by, I began to think about my future. College, a job, and starting a family. I began fantasizing about what a perfect life would be like, had a reality check, then created mental goals in my head to hopefully achieve in the surprisingly-near future. Thinking about what I had to go through as a kid I could not imagine having my own children going through the same or something even close. I have been through it and, sure enough, it was not fun, almost stressful at times. I made it a must that I attend a university to further my knowledge in a particular area. Obtaining a well-paying job is what I feel is the most important to support my family in all their wants and needs. I will make it my duty to give my family the lives I was never exposed to. Although my parents didn't raise me how I would have liked them to, it shaped me into the person I am today.
Knowing my parents moved to the United States from China, unfamiliar with the culture and language, I had a feeling it would affect me in all ways possible. They taught my brothers and I everything within their range of knowledge, for example, Chinese traditions, manners, etc. However, in areas dealing with the English language or anything American, it was just so out of their reach. I wished I could have been more exposed to things outside of their comfort zone, but it was hard. After all, I was raised as if I was born in China because that is what my parents grew up in. That did not prepare me for life in the United States. I lacked certain skills that most kids are taught at an instant. Do not get me wrong. I valued the cultural traditions, manners, and language they taught me. It helped me develop pride and respect towards my ethnicity. In the end, I appreciate what they had to offer, but in most cases it just was not enough.
When it came to school it was a dreadful six hours of my day. Immediately, I was behind from most of my classmates, being required to take special classes to help me improve my English. They were not to my liking and separated me from my friends. The feeling of being left out lingered for a while. Instead of allowing my emotions to get to me I was encouraged to work harder to overcome this obstacle. My parents were never strict in making sure I get my work done or that I get straight-A's. One of the reasons was because they did not have the knowledge to guide me like they wanted to. Instead they sort of just let me take care of what I needed to do and be in charge of my own learning. They thought that without pressuring me I would become the person I would want to be. Someone they would be proud to call their daughter. In a short period of time I was told I could return to my normal classes because I reached the same level of knowledge as those the same age as myself. Within a few months I was able to accomplish something others take years to overcome. Soon enough I was one of the top students in my grade. I could not be any more ecstatic. This was the event that really jump-started me being confident in myself. It made me realize I was capable of great things as long as I had a great desire to.
Nonetheless, I was constantly being underestimated, even with my own aunties, uncles, and cousins. They knew the conditions I grew up in, so they created false accusations to bring me down. I would often tell them the life I fantasize about when I become an adult. Describing my dream car, house, job and so much more. I needed them to support me through my future plans, but that was not always the case. They would begin by saying how I was stupid enough to think it will ever happen and how I was not fit to carryout that lifestyle. Sometimes it was not as direct as that, but I knew they were thinking something along those lines. Their comments did not benefit me in any way, but bring me to tears unnecessarily. I knew I was not what they described me as and I showed that in my elementary years. I wanted to accomplish something beyond their standards of me to really prove them wrong. Whenever I heard a negative comment anger would rush inside me, trying to hold back and not explode. I did not want them to know how I actually felt. Instead, I put all that energy to my studies. For them to see me excel is all I ever wanted.
They underestimated me, my own family. That is something I never expected from the people I loved. Regardless what they said, I could not let it get the best of me. I took their negative comments and used it as an opportunity to for them to see me improve. I had to begin with English, the basis of everything. Everyday, whether it was before or once I got home from school, I would spend hours watching TV, and not just for fun or to get away with not doing homework, but to listen and comprehend what they were saying. Educational shows on Disney, Nikelodeon, and PBS is what I lived off of. It might not seem like much, but believe it or not, it gave me the knowledge to learn an entire language on my own. That's something I never thought I was ever capable of. Of course that is not all I did. I took initiative everywhere I went. Starting conversations with others was how I applied what I learned to the real world. This went on until I reached a point where everything about the language became second nature. I was determined. And when I am determined I do not back down until what I want is fulfilled. At an early age I set goals for myself. Goals that seemed quite extreme, but were necessary in my situation. Over the years, the negativity I received no longer bothers me. I found a way to block it out and move on with my life.
My parents did not give me enough of what I needed in life, like social skills, knowledge about American customs, or the language, but I could not blame them. All I could do was make the best of it and learn from my experiences. As the years went by, I began to think about my future. College, a job, and starting a family. I began fantasizing about what a perfect life would be like, had a reality check, then created mental goals in my head to hopefully achieve in the surprisingly-near future. Thinking about what I had to go through as a kid I could not imagine having my own children going through the same or something even close. I have been through it and, sure enough, it was not fun, almost stressful at times. I made it a must that I attend a university to further my knowledge in a particular area. Obtaining a well-paying job is what I feel is the most important to support my family in all their wants and needs. I will make it my duty to give my family the lives I was never exposed to. Although my parents didn't raise me how I would have liked them to, it shaped me into the person I am today.
Friday, September 12, 2014
Word Choice Olympics
1. One day, Johnny, Maria, and Natalie were celebrating their mother's birthday. With a father enlisted in the military they tend to value their mother the most while he is gone. There they are, minding their own business, socializing, while all of a sudden they hear a scream. It came from their mother. A cry of happiness. In the corner of their eye they see their father peak out from the slight opening of the door. Without hesitation they ran out the door and into his arms, yearning for the comfort of the person they haven't been with for almost 6 months. Their life felt complete, finally being united as a family.
2. Lindy was currently at the location where a shooting had occurred a few hours ago. While trying to avoid stepping on blood with her brand-new shoes, she put on her gloves and began scouting the premises for valuable evidence. Halfway through the investigation she heard a faint sound of someone knocking. Knowing she was the only one at the scene, nervousness caused her to rapidly drop what she was working on and turn her head. A man completely dressed in black along with a mask only revealing the eyes stood by the door holding a gun pointed at Lindy. Instantly she knew who it was and didn't think twice before taking out her gun and pointing it at the murderer for self defense.
3. All the years of dedication to the sport of volleyball lead up to this exact moment.With this being USA's first game they needed to start off with a bang, no regrets. It is the last set of the game and the score is 21-21 with 30 seconds left on the clock. With the audience on the edge of their seat Brazil went ahead for the serve. Watching it float across the net, USA dove in with a bump, then a set, and finally a kill. The crowd roared louder than ever as the winning team jumped for joy into each other's arms.
2. Lindy was currently at the location where a shooting had occurred a few hours ago. While trying to avoid stepping on blood with her brand-new shoes, she put on her gloves and began scouting the premises for valuable evidence. Halfway through the investigation she heard a faint sound of someone knocking. Knowing she was the only one at the scene, nervousness caused her to rapidly drop what she was working on and turn her head. A man completely dressed in black along with a mask only revealing the eyes stood by the door holding a gun pointed at Lindy. Instantly she knew who it was and didn't think twice before taking out her gun and pointing it at the murderer for self defense.
3. All the years of dedication to the sport of volleyball lead up to this exact moment.With this being USA's first game they needed to start off with a bang, no regrets. It is the last set of the game and the score is 21-21 with 30 seconds left on the clock. With the audience on the edge of their seat Brazil went ahead for the serve. Watching it float across the net, USA dove in with a bump, then a set, and finally a kill. The crowd roared louder than ever as the winning team jumped for joy into each other's arms.
Jennifer and Anna have been the closet of friends since diaper days. They grew up, learned, and been through tough times together. When it was time to begin applying for colleges there was no doubt they would try to get accepted by the same universities. Months of anticipation flew by until one day, they both received letters from the University of California Irvine. The next day at school, with letters in hand, they met up to reveal the news together. As they rip the envelope open and pull out the crisp piece of paper, they began to read. Their screams of excitement were almost unison as they found out they were admitted.
Carly was a devoted wife to her husband, who has been dealing with cancer for the past year. It was a normal day. She never anticipated for anything wrong to happen. During work she received a phone call from the hospital saying her husband needed to be taken in for an emergency surgery. She didn't know what to think, but instead, she rushed to the hospital as quick as she could. By the time she got there it was too late. The nurses explained how the surgery was unsuccessful. She felt like an enormous hole just punctured her heart with no hopes of recovery. All she could do was sit in the cafe , lay her head on the table, and cry.
Monday, September 8, 2014
College Essay: DRAFT
UC Berkley:
Describe the world you came from – for example, your family, community or school – and tell us how your world shaped your dreams and aspirations.
Knowing my parents moved to the United States from China, unfamiliar with the culture and language, I had a feeling it would affect me in all ways possible. They taught my brothers and I everything within their range of knowledge, for example, Chinese traditions, manners, etc. However, in areas dealing with the English language or anything American, it was just so out of their reach. I was raised as if I was born in China because that is what my parents are used to. I lacked certain skills that most kids are taught at an instant. That means if I wanted to learn something different, like English, it had to be on my own and most of the time it wasn't easy. I appreciate what they had to offer, but in most cases it just wasn't enough.
When it came to school it was a dreadful six hours of my day. Immediately, I was behind from most of my classmates. I had to be placed in special classes that weren't to my liking and separated me from my friends. Instead of feeling downgraded I was encouraged to work harder. My parents were never strict in making sure I get my work done or that I get straight-A's. They sort of just let me take care of what I needed to do. Let me be in charge of my own learning. Without pressuring me was the best way for me to become successful. In a short period of time I was told I could return to my normal classes because I reached the same level of knowledge as those of my own age. Within a few months I was able to accomplish something others take years to overcome. I was proud of myself. Soon enough I was one of the top students in my grade. This was the event that really jump-started me being confident in myself. It made me realize what I was capable of if I put my mind to it.
Nonetheless, I was constantly being underestimated, even with my own aunties, uncles, and cousins. They knew the conditions I grew up in, so they created false accusations to bring me down. It didn't benefit me in any way, but put me to tears unnecessarily. I knew I was not what they described me as and I showed that in my elementary years, but they weren't the people I would tell everything to. I wanted to accomplish something beyond their standards of me to really prove them wrong. Something crazy like graduating as summa cum laude or even valedictorian. Till this day I am still in the works at achieving those goals.
They underestimated me, my own family. That's something I never expected from the people I loved. Regardless what they said, I couldn't let it get the best of me. I took their negative comments and used it as motivation. I had to begin with English, the basis of everything. Everyday, whether it was before or once I got home from school, I would spend hours watching TV, and not just for fun or to get away with doing homework, but to listen and comprehend what they were teaching. Educational shows on Disney, Nikelodeon, and PBS is what I lived off of. I know it might sound so childish, but believe it or not, it gave me the knowledge to learn an entire language on my own. That's something I never thought I was ever capable of. Of course that is not all I did. Starting conversations with others was how I applied what I learned to real life. I was determined, and when I am determined I do not back down until what I want is fulfilled. At an early age I set goals. Goals that seemed quite extreme, but were necessary in my situation.
My parents did not give me enough of what I needed in life, but I could not blame them. All I could do was make the best of it and learn from my experiences. As the years went by, I began to think about my future. College, a job, and starting a family. I began fantasizing about what a perfect life would be like, had a reality check, then created goals in my head to hopefully achieve in the surprisingly-near future. Thinking about what I had to go through as a kid I could not imagine having my own children going through the same or something anywhere along those lines. I have been through it and, sure enough, it was not fun, almost stressful at times. I made it a must that I attend university to further my knowledge in a particular area. Obtaining a well-paying job is what I feel is most important to support my family in all their wants and needs. I will make it my duty to give them the lives I was never exposed to. Although my parents didn't raise me how it would have liked to, it shaped me into the person I am today.
Describe the world you came from – for example, your family, community or school – and tell us how your world shaped your dreams and aspirations.
Knowing my parents moved to the United States from China, unfamiliar with the culture and language, I had a feeling it would affect me in all ways possible. They taught my brothers and I everything within their range of knowledge, for example, Chinese traditions, manners, etc. However, in areas dealing with the English language or anything American, it was just so out of their reach. I was raised as if I was born in China because that is what my parents are used to. I lacked certain skills that most kids are taught at an instant. That means if I wanted to learn something different, like English, it had to be on my own and most of the time it wasn't easy. I appreciate what they had to offer, but in most cases it just wasn't enough.
When it came to school it was a dreadful six hours of my day. Immediately, I was behind from most of my classmates. I had to be placed in special classes that weren't to my liking and separated me from my friends. Instead of feeling downgraded I was encouraged to work harder. My parents were never strict in making sure I get my work done or that I get straight-A's. They sort of just let me take care of what I needed to do. Let me be in charge of my own learning. Without pressuring me was the best way for me to become successful. In a short period of time I was told I could return to my normal classes because I reached the same level of knowledge as those of my own age. Within a few months I was able to accomplish something others take years to overcome. I was proud of myself. Soon enough I was one of the top students in my grade. This was the event that really jump-started me being confident in myself. It made me realize what I was capable of if I put my mind to it.
Nonetheless, I was constantly being underestimated, even with my own aunties, uncles, and cousins. They knew the conditions I grew up in, so they created false accusations to bring me down. It didn't benefit me in any way, but put me to tears unnecessarily. I knew I was not what they described me as and I showed that in my elementary years, but they weren't the people I would tell everything to. I wanted to accomplish something beyond their standards of me to really prove them wrong. Something crazy like graduating as summa cum laude or even valedictorian. Till this day I am still in the works at achieving those goals.
They underestimated me, my own family. That's something I never expected from the people I loved. Regardless what they said, I couldn't let it get the best of me. I took their negative comments and used it as motivation. I had to begin with English, the basis of everything. Everyday, whether it was before or once I got home from school, I would spend hours watching TV, and not just for fun or to get away with doing homework, but to listen and comprehend what they were teaching. Educational shows on Disney, Nikelodeon, and PBS is what I lived off of. I know it might sound so childish, but believe it or not, it gave me the knowledge to learn an entire language on my own. That's something I never thought I was ever capable of. Of course that is not all I did. Starting conversations with others was how I applied what I learned to real life. I was determined, and when I am determined I do not back down until what I want is fulfilled. At an early age I set goals. Goals that seemed quite extreme, but were necessary in my situation.
My parents did not give me enough of what I needed in life, but I could not blame them. All I could do was make the best of it and learn from my experiences. As the years went by, I began to think about my future. College, a job, and starting a family. I began fantasizing about what a perfect life would be like, had a reality check, then created goals in my head to hopefully achieve in the surprisingly-near future. Thinking about what I had to go through as a kid I could not imagine having my own children going through the same or something anywhere along those lines. I have been through it and, sure enough, it was not fun, almost stressful at times. I made it a must that I attend university to further my knowledge in a particular area. Obtaining a well-paying job is what I feel is most important to support my family in all their wants and needs. I will make it my duty to give them the lives I was never exposed to. Although my parents didn't raise me how it would have liked to, it shaped me into the person I am today.
Sunday, August 31, 2014
College Essay Prompts
Cornell University
The primary focus of your college interest essay should be what you intend to study at Cornell.
On the online Common Application Writing Supplement, please respond to the essay question below (maximum of 650 and minimum of 250 words) that corresponds to the undergraduate college(s) or school(s) to which you are applying.
If you are utilizing the Primary/Alternate admission option, you must complete an essay for both colleges/schools; please complete the essays that correspond to your primary and alternate choices.
College of Agriculture and Life Sciences: How have your interests and related experiences influenced the major you have selected in the College of Agriculture and Life Sciences?
College of Architecture, Art, and Planning: Why are you excited to pursue your chosen major in AAP? What specifically about AAP and Cornell University will help you fulfill your academic and creative interests and long-term goals?
College of Arts and Sciences: Describe two or three of your current intellectual interests and why they are exciting to you. Why will Cornell’s College of Arts and Sciences be the right environment in which to pursue your interests?
College of Engineering: Tell us about an engineering idea you have, or about your interest in engineering. Describe how your ideas and interests may be realized by—and linked to—specific resources within the College of Engineering. Finally, explain what a Cornell Engineering education will enable you to accomplish.
School of Hotel Administration: Hospitality is the largest industry in the world and includes sectors such as hotel operations, food and beverage management, real estate, finance, marketing, and law. Considering the breadth of our industry, please describe what work and non-work experiences, academic interests, and career goals influenced your decision to study hospitality management? How will these contribute to your success at the School of Hotel Administration?
College of Human Ecology: What do you value about the College of Human Ecology's perspective, and the majors that interest you, as you consider your academic goals and plans for the future?
School of Industrial and Labor Relations: Tell us about your intellectual interests, how they sprung from your course, service, work or life experiences, and what makes them exciting to you. Describe how these interests may be realized and linked to the ILR curriculum.
UC Berkley
Prompt #1: Describe the world you came from – for example, your family, community or school – and tell us how your world shaped your dreams and aspirations.
Prompt #2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplish makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are.
University of Washington
Choose from either A or B:
A: Discuss how your family's experience or cultural history enriched you or presented you with opportunities or challenges in pursuing your educational goals.
B: Tell us a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it.
The primary focus of your college interest essay should be what you intend to study at Cornell.
On the online Common Application Writing Supplement, please respond to the essay question below (maximum of 650 and minimum of 250 words) that corresponds to the undergraduate college(s) or school(s) to which you are applying.
If you are utilizing the Primary/Alternate admission option, you must complete an essay for both colleges/schools; please complete the essays that correspond to your primary and alternate choices.
College of Agriculture and Life Sciences: How have your interests and related experiences influenced the major you have selected in the College of Agriculture and Life Sciences?
College of Architecture, Art, and Planning: Why are you excited to pursue your chosen major in AAP? What specifically about AAP and Cornell University will help you fulfill your academic and creative interests and long-term goals?
College of Arts and Sciences: Describe two or three of your current intellectual interests and why they are exciting to you. Why will Cornell’s College of Arts and Sciences be the right environment in which to pursue your interests?
College of Engineering: Tell us about an engineering idea you have, or about your interest in engineering. Describe how your ideas and interests may be realized by—and linked to—specific resources within the College of Engineering. Finally, explain what a Cornell Engineering education will enable you to accomplish.
School of Hotel Administration: Hospitality is the largest industry in the world and includes sectors such as hotel operations, food and beverage management, real estate, finance, marketing, and law. Considering the breadth of our industry, please describe what work and non-work experiences, academic interests, and career goals influenced your decision to study hospitality management? How will these contribute to your success at the School of Hotel Administration?
College of Human Ecology: What do you value about the College of Human Ecology's perspective, and the majors that interest you, as you consider your academic goals and plans for the future?
School of Industrial and Labor Relations: Tell us about your intellectual interests, how they sprung from your course, service, work or life experiences, and what makes them exciting to you. Describe how these interests may be realized and linked to the ILR curriculum.
UC Berkley
Prompt #1: Describe the world you came from – for example, your family, community or school – and tell us how your world shaped your dreams and aspirations.
Prompt #2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplish makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are.
University of Washington
Choose from either A or B:
A: Discuss how your family's experience or cultural history enriched you or presented you with opportunities or challenges in pursuing your educational goals.
B: Tell us a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it.
Friday, August 29, 2014
Wednesday, August 27, 2014
Coming of Age: Final
Being born and raised in Guangdong, China, my parents made the brave decision to move to America not knowing a word of English, trying to start a new life. Growing up I was at a great disadvantage compared to most kids. I was taught manners, how to walk, speak Chinese, and understand cultural traditions. That was about it. I lacked certain skills that most kids were taught. For example, speaking English. I basically lived my entire life without any guidance. Some people would say it's because they don't care, but I personally think it's because they trusted me to do whatever I felt was right, to fend for myself. Without even knowing it they taught me the most valuable lesson I could ever ask for. On the other hand, I desperately craved guidance. I needed someone to show me the right way of doing things, instead of learning it the hard way. Often times I struggled on an everyday basis, from learning English to just fitting in. The only thing I ever wanted growing up was someone who understood and would support me every step of the way.
Although my parents weren't always there for me I had two older brothers, Thomas and Wayon, who were there through it all. I developed this unique bond with Thomas that was unlike any other. With Wayon, on the other hand, we were polar opposites. Thomas guided me when no one else could. He taught me and disciplined me. Being a straight-A student and an outstanding athlete, he was definitely a role model. He grew up in the same situation as me. I took advantage of his personal experiences, so I can learn from them and not make the same mistakes. He was the first person I would go to when I needed help with homework or just wanted advice. Often times I would complain to him about how stressful school is or how I just want to give up. He never fails to bring me back to positivity, reminding me that it'll all be worth it or it's going to prepare me for college and life after that. I made me think more about life as a whole rather than useless tasks repeating itself and I couldn't be anymore grateful for that. As cheesy as it sounds, I don't know what I would've ever done without him. The day I have been dreading for years has finally come. The day he begins a new chapter of his life, college.
I'm sitting in the car, the car we've had for the longest time, unable to be still with all the jitters rushing inside of me. We pull up to a curb which means it is time to get out. With camera in hand I quickly jump out as Thomas and my parents load enormous bags of luggage onto a tiny cart. Thomas and I push the cart to check it in while our parents park the car. It's happening, it's actually happening is all I could think while the large bags are being lifted onto a scale. Once that is taken care of we make our way to a bench and wait patiently as there is time to spare.At this moment feel mixed emotions as this is a bitter-sweet moment for me. I am beyond proud of him because he is the most hard-working person I know and no one deserves it more, but also I am depressed because I will no longer have him to guide, support, and push me through my years of adolescence and especially when I begin high school, when I need him the most.
Looking back, Thomas played a vital role in shaping me into the person I am today. As early as I could remember, I was a selfish, inconsiderate little girl too worried about everything that had to deal with me. If someone were to tell me about the hardships they're going through, I had that, "Well, that's their problem, not mine" attitude. The more time I spent with Thomas the more I transformed into a different person. I constantly witnessed him doing good deeds. For example, he would kindly offer help to those who seemed to be struggling with grocery bags, or simply hold the door for others before closing it completely. He was the kind of person my parents were ecstatically proud to call their son. Instead of feeling downgraded by their feelings towards him, I used it as motivation to improve who I am as a person. Being around him for such a long period of my life is what definitely influenced me to be a "modified" version of him. I gradually removed that childish attitude and replaced it with kindness. I saw Thomas as a role model. Most of the time he didn't directly teach me how to behave, but instead, I observed and caught on. It might seem as if he was the kindest person ever, but that was not the case. As brother and sister we had our fair share of fights and stupid arguments, but the part that makes us so close is that we can overcome any obstacle and realize that, in the end, we're still family.
Close friends and relatives come to greet and congratulate him on everything he has achieved, not forgetting to wish him the best of luck at the University of Washington. He turns his wrist to take a quick glimpse at his watch and soon enough, he says, "Well, I should start heading to security check." The feeling of anxiety fills my entire body as I can't bear to see him leave. We walk with him until retractable belts form barriers signaling that this is the farthest we could go. He is on his own from here on out. I turn to him and spread my arms out on both sides of my body to give him a big hug. A tear rushed out of my eyes and down my face. Not wanting him to see me cry, I quickly wiped it away with the sleeve of my shirt. This was the turning point for me. From this point on I'm not going to have someone to make sure I do well in school and make good decisions. He is moving on to bigger and better things and so should I. He has guided me well all these years, now it's time to put everything he taught me to good use. To be successful in life I can no longer rely on him or anyone else to do the thinking for me. I like to believe everything happens for a reason. This particular event was specifically designed to help me come to realization, to become a mature adult worthy to take on this new change.
We said our last goodbyes and before we knew it he was waiting in line, occasionally looking back at us as if he didn't want to leave. Each step he took made me more and more anxious for him and for myself. Thinking about what our futures would be like as we drift our separate ways. Would he be so busy he forgot he had a little sister? Will I crumble without his guidance? Will he still treat me the same when he gets back? All these questions gather in my head like a swarm of bees, but only time will reveal the answers. Almost near the front of the line, he waved at us and I was quick enough to snap a picture. This is a picture I will always cherish. It reminds me of what I had realized that day. His smile showed he was ready to take on this next chapter of his life. As my role model and brother, if he was ready then so was I.
Although my parents weren't always there for me I had two older brothers, Thomas and Wayon, who were there through it all. I developed this unique bond with Thomas that was unlike any other. With Wayon, on the other hand, we were polar opposites. Thomas guided me when no one else could. He taught me and disciplined me. Being a straight-A student and an outstanding athlete, he was definitely a role model. He grew up in the same situation as me. I took advantage of his personal experiences, so I can learn from them and not make the same mistakes. He was the first person I would go to when I needed help with homework or just wanted advice. Often times I would complain to him about how stressful school is or how I just want to give up. He never fails to bring me back to positivity, reminding me that it'll all be worth it or it's going to prepare me for college and life after that. I made me think more about life as a whole rather than useless tasks repeating itself and I couldn't be anymore grateful for that. As cheesy as it sounds, I don't know what I would've ever done without him. The day I have been dreading for years has finally come. The day he begins a new chapter of his life, college.
I'm sitting in the car, the car we've had for the longest time, unable to be still with all the jitters rushing inside of me. We pull up to a curb which means it is time to get out. With camera in hand I quickly jump out as Thomas and my parents load enormous bags of luggage onto a tiny cart. Thomas and I push the cart to check it in while our parents park the car. It's happening, it's actually happening is all I could think while the large bags are being lifted onto a scale. Once that is taken care of we make our way to a bench and wait patiently as there is time to spare.At this moment feel mixed emotions as this is a bitter-sweet moment for me. I am beyond proud of him because he is the most hard-working person I know and no one deserves it more, but also I am depressed because I will no longer have him to guide, support, and push me through my years of adolescence and especially when I begin high school, when I need him the most.
Looking back, Thomas played a vital role in shaping me into the person I am today. As early as I could remember, I was a selfish, inconsiderate little girl too worried about everything that had to deal with me. If someone were to tell me about the hardships they're going through, I had that, "Well, that's their problem, not mine" attitude. The more time I spent with Thomas the more I transformed into a different person. I constantly witnessed him doing good deeds. For example, he would kindly offer help to those who seemed to be struggling with grocery bags, or simply hold the door for others before closing it completely. He was the kind of person my parents were ecstatically proud to call their son. Instead of feeling downgraded by their feelings towards him, I used it as motivation to improve who I am as a person. Being around him for such a long period of my life is what definitely influenced me to be a "modified" version of him. I gradually removed that childish attitude and replaced it with kindness. I saw Thomas as a role model. Most of the time he didn't directly teach me how to behave, but instead, I observed and caught on. It might seem as if he was the kindest person ever, but that was not the case. As brother and sister we had our fair share of fights and stupid arguments, but the part that makes us so close is that we can overcome any obstacle and realize that, in the end, we're still family.
Close friends and relatives come to greet and congratulate him on everything he has achieved, not forgetting to wish him the best of luck at the University of Washington. He turns his wrist to take a quick glimpse at his watch and soon enough, he says, "Well, I should start heading to security check." The feeling of anxiety fills my entire body as I can't bear to see him leave. We walk with him until retractable belts form barriers signaling that this is the farthest we could go. He is on his own from here on out. I turn to him and spread my arms out on both sides of my body to give him a big hug. A tear rushed out of my eyes and down my face. Not wanting him to see me cry, I quickly wiped it away with the sleeve of my shirt. This was the turning point for me. From this point on I'm not going to have someone to make sure I do well in school and make good decisions. He is moving on to bigger and better things and so should I. He has guided me well all these years, now it's time to put everything he taught me to good use. To be successful in life I can no longer rely on him or anyone else to do the thinking for me. I like to believe everything happens for a reason. This particular event was specifically designed to help me come to realization, to become a mature adult worthy to take on this new change.
We said our last goodbyes and before we knew it he was waiting in line, occasionally looking back at us as if he didn't want to leave. Each step he took made me more and more anxious for him and for myself. Thinking about what our futures would be like as we drift our separate ways. Would he be so busy he forgot he had a little sister? Will I crumble without his guidance? Will he still treat me the same when he gets back? All these questions gather in my head like a swarm of bees, but only time will reveal the answers. Almost near the front of the line, he waved at us and I was quick enough to snap a picture. This is a picture I will always cherish. It reminds me of what I had realized that day. His smile showed he was ready to take on this next chapter of his life. As my role model and brother, if he was ready then so was I.
Tuesday, August 19, 2014
Blog Revision
For my header I chose the phrase, "Paradise is where you make it." It reminds me that it if I'm ever in a bad situation it can always turn around depending on what I do with it. I used a beach sunset because, to me, that resembles paradise. The header shows I can effectively use the magnetic lasso and eraser tools to remove the background, leaving only the subject. I changed the color of my text and background to match the header. My posts from freshman year are organized in it's own section on the side of my blog for easy access. My blog as a whole is arranged from year, to month, then by post.
Sunday, August 17, 2014
Coming of Age: Rough Draft
As a kid I was never raised like the stereotypical asian child. My parents made the brave decision to move here from Guandong, China, not knowing a word of English, trying to start a new life. Growing up I was at a great disadvantage compared to most kids. I was taught manners, how to walk, speak Chinese, and understand cultural traditions. That was about it. I know what you're thinking. "What about English?" I had no choice but to learn on my own, through TV and hearing it everywhere I go. I basically lived my entire life without any guidance. What do I mean by that? Take this example. When I got home from school as an elementary student my parents wouldn't ask me "what did you do today?" or tell me "don't forget to do any homework you have!" They were never on my case about grades or extracurriculars. Instead, they let me do whatever I needed to do. Some people would say it's because they don't care, but I personally think it's because they trusted me to do whatever I felt was right, to fend for myself. It taught me to learn and become an independent person. Without even knowing it they taught me the most valuable lesson I could ever ask for.
Although my parents weren't always there for me I had two older brothers, Thomas and Wayon, who were there through it all. I developed this unique bond with Thomas that was unlike any other. With Wayon, on the other hand, we were polar opposites. Thomas guided me when no one else could. He taught me and disciplined me. Being a straight-A student and an outstanding athlete, he was definitely a role model. He was the first person I would go to when I need help with homework or I wanted to figure out my future. Often times I complain to him about how stressful school is or how I just want to give up. He never fails to bring me back to positivity, reminding me that it'll all be worth it or it's going to prepare me for college and life after that. As cheesy as it sounds, I don't know what I would've ever done without him. The day I have been dreading for years has finally come. The day he begins a new chapter of his life, college.
With camera in hand I hop out of the car quickly as Thomas and my parents load enormous bags of luggage onto a cart. Thomas and I push the cart to check it in while our parents park the car. It's happening, it's actually happening is all I could think while the large bags are being lifted onto a scale. Once that is all done we make our way to a bench and wait patiently as there is time to spare. I feel mixed emotions as this is a bitter-sweet moment for me. Proud because he is the most hard-working person I know and no one deserves it more, but also depressed because I will no longer have him to guide me when I soon begin high school, when I need him the most.
Close friends and relatives come to greet and congratulate him on everything he has achieved, not forgetting to wish him the best of luck at the University of Washington. He turns his wrist to take a quick glimpse at his watch and soon enough, he says, "well I should start heading to security check." The feeling of anxiety fills my entire body as I don't want to see him leave. We walk with him until retractable belts form barriers signaling that this is the farthest we could go. He is on his own from here on out. I spread my arms out on both sides of my body and gave him a big hug. A tear rushed out of my eyes and down my face. Not wanting him to see me cry, I quickly wiped it away with the sleeve of my shirt. From this point on I'm not going to have someone to make sure I do well in school and make the right decisions. It made me realize I have to take initiative if I want to be successful on my own.
We said our last goodbyes and before we knew it he was waiting in line, occasionally looking back at us as if he didn't want to leave. Each step he took made me more and more anxious for him and for myself. Thinking about what our futures would be like as we drift our separate ways. Would he be so busy he forgot he had a little sister? Will I crumble without his guidance? Will he still treat me the same when he gets back? All these questions gather in my head, but only time will reveal the answers. Almost near the front of the line, he waved at us and I was quick enough to snap a picture. His smile showed he was ready to take on this journey. As my role model and brother, if he was ready then so was I.
Although my parents weren't always there for me I had two older brothers, Thomas and Wayon, who were there through it all. I developed this unique bond with Thomas that was unlike any other. With Wayon, on the other hand, we were polar opposites. Thomas guided me when no one else could. He taught me and disciplined me. Being a straight-A student and an outstanding athlete, he was definitely a role model. He was the first person I would go to when I need help with homework or I wanted to figure out my future. Often times I complain to him about how stressful school is or how I just want to give up. He never fails to bring me back to positivity, reminding me that it'll all be worth it or it's going to prepare me for college and life after that. As cheesy as it sounds, I don't know what I would've ever done without him. The day I have been dreading for years has finally come. The day he begins a new chapter of his life, college.
With camera in hand I hop out of the car quickly as Thomas and my parents load enormous bags of luggage onto a cart. Thomas and I push the cart to check it in while our parents park the car. It's happening, it's actually happening is all I could think while the large bags are being lifted onto a scale. Once that is all done we make our way to a bench and wait patiently as there is time to spare. I feel mixed emotions as this is a bitter-sweet moment for me. Proud because he is the most hard-working person I know and no one deserves it more, but also depressed because I will no longer have him to guide me when I soon begin high school, when I need him the most.
Close friends and relatives come to greet and congratulate him on everything he has achieved, not forgetting to wish him the best of luck at the University of Washington. He turns his wrist to take a quick glimpse at his watch and soon enough, he says, "well I should start heading to security check." The feeling of anxiety fills my entire body as I don't want to see him leave. We walk with him until retractable belts form barriers signaling that this is the farthest we could go. He is on his own from here on out. I spread my arms out on both sides of my body and gave him a big hug. A tear rushed out of my eyes and down my face. Not wanting him to see me cry, I quickly wiped it away with the sleeve of my shirt. From this point on I'm not going to have someone to make sure I do well in school and make the right decisions. It made me realize I have to take initiative if I want to be successful on my own.
We said our last goodbyes and before we knew it he was waiting in line, occasionally looking back at us as if he didn't want to leave. Each step he took made me more and more anxious for him and for myself. Thinking about what our futures would be like as we drift our separate ways. Would he be so busy he forgot he had a little sister? Will I crumble without his guidance? Will he still treat me the same when he gets back? All these questions gather in my head, but only time will reveal the answers. Almost near the front of the line, he waved at us and I was quick enough to snap a picture. His smile showed he was ready to take on this journey. As my role model and brother, if he was ready then so was I.
Thursday, August 14, 2014
Responsibility of Visitor Safety
Many visitors on this island plan exciting excursions in hopes to experience what nature has to offer. Little do they know the dangers they may face along the way. The island of Hawaii is constantly having to deal with accidents on our most popular attractions. Some say the visitor is to blame, and others, the location. I, on the other hand, would have to blame the property owner because they are responsible for installing warning signs, taking care of the land, and putting restrictions on the property.
Keeping up with the property's maintenance needs is the first step to ensure the safety of all visitors. The County of Maui apologized for the lack of warning signs after David Potts' death from being striked by a large wave. The property owner should be the most familiar with the location and what it is capable of. Therefore, they should warn visitors of any hazards that might jeopardize their safety. Taking care of the land is another task the property owner should be aware of. Something as simple as keeping the area free from litter will prevent injury. Paula Ramirez and Elizabeth Brem both died after walking off an area of a cliff hidden by vegetation. Fences can only be built with the authorization of the property owner. Restrictions are needed to alert the visitors of where they are allowed to be and where they should stay away from. Property owners have a great deal of responsibility when it comes to protecting everyone that steps foot onto their land.
The property owner is responsible for the safety of all visitors because they are in charge of installing warning signs, taking care of the land, and putting restrictions where needed. It's hard to put the blame on the property because the outdoors can be very unpredictable. Weather can also add on to the list of hazards. The people should use their common sense where ever they go. They need to understand the possible dangers before even entering the property. The visitors can't be fully blamed because they can make careless mistakes just like everyone else. As you can see, the property owner, location, and visitors all have some part in causing an accident, but the property owner should have complete responsibility because it is their land after all.
Keeping up with the property's maintenance needs is the first step to ensure the safety of all visitors. The County of Maui apologized for the lack of warning signs after David Potts' death from being striked by a large wave. The property owner should be the most familiar with the location and what it is capable of. Therefore, they should warn visitors of any hazards that might jeopardize their safety. Taking care of the land is another task the property owner should be aware of. Something as simple as keeping the area free from litter will prevent injury. Paula Ramirez and Elizabeth Brem both died after walking off an area of a cliff hidden by vegetation. Fences can only be built with the authorization of the property owner. Restrictions are needed to alert the visitors of where they are allowed to be and where they should stay away from. Property owners have a great deal of responsibility when it comes to protecting everyone that steps foot onto their land.
The property owner is responsible for the safety of all visitors because they are in charge of installing warning signs, taking care of the land, and putting restrictions where needed. It's hard to put the blame on the property because the outdoors can be very unpredictable. Weather can also add on to the list of hazards. The people should use their common sense where ever they go. They need to understand the possible dangers before even entering the property. The visitors can't be fully blamed because they can make careless mistakes just like everyone else. As you can see, the property owner, location, and visitors all have some part in causing an accident, but the property owner should have complete responsibility because it is their land after all.
Wednesday, August 13, 2014
Group Positions
1. Visitors should be responsible for their own safety
2. The location is responsible for the visitors' safety
3. The Government or owner of property is responsible for any accidents
2. The location is responsible for the visitors' safety
3. The Government or owner of property is responsible for any accidents
Monday, May 19, 2014
GLO Portfolio
The ending of another semester begins the creation of another online portfolio. The link below will lead you to my 2nd Semester GLO Portfolio. Please browse through and examine what I accomplished in the MeneMAC English Language Arts program. Then, please answer the following question as a comment.
"What have you learned about my achievements in MeneMAC this past year."
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"What have you learned about my achievements in MeneMAC this past year."
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Sunday, May 4, 2014
Merchant of Venice Literary Analysis: FINAL
In the 16th century life was more complicated than it is today. Love, religion, money, justice, and law play key roles in the happiness of those living at the time. In a comedic play taking place in Italy, "Merchant of Venice" by William Shakespeare shows how the five factors can jeopardize how you see others and who you are as a person. When Bassanio is in need of money to impress the girl of his dreams, Portia, he turns to his good friend Antonio. Shylock, a moneylender, is against everything involving Antonio because of what he did to him in the past. Therefore, a bond is created to sacrifice a pound of Antonio's flesh to Shylock if the money isn't returned in a certain amount of time. In the play he proves himself to be a cruel and relentless Jew unworthy of any respect.
Shylock uses his and other's beliefs as a way to segregate. His treatment towards Christians, specifically Antonio, is often unruly. In act 1, scene 3, lines 143-148, Shylock states, "If you repay me not on such a day, in such a place, such sum or sums as are expressed in the condition, let the forfeit be nominated for an equal pound of your fair flesh, to be cut off and taken in what part of your body pleaseth me." If a non-Christian were to borrow money from Shylock there wouldn't be such an intimidating bond. He really knows how to hold a grudge, especially for Antonio. Shylock uses religion as his excuse for his hatred towards others. In act 2, scene 5, lines 13-15, he says," I am not bid for love: they flatter me. But yet I'll go in hate, to feed upon the prodigal Christian." Even when it's not necessary, he always finds a way to put down Christians. He really is a cruel Jew. Shylock shows harsh racism even when it is not the right time for it.
Shylock hasn't showed any respect for others, therefore, he doesn't deserve any. When Jessica took off with Shylock's money he was more worried about the ducats than losing his daughter. In act 2, scene 8, lines 18-22, Solanio says," A sealed bag, two sealed bags of ducats, of double ducats, stolen from me by my daughter! And jewels- two stones, two rich and precious stones, stolen by my daughter! Justice! Find the girl! She hath the stones upon her, and the ducats!" Even from other's point of views, all he cares about is his money. For a person like him that will never change. He almost treats Lancelot like a slave. In act 2, scene 3, lines 94-96, Lancelot states, " My masters a very Jew; give him a present! give him a halter: I am famished in his service: you may tell every finger I have with my ribs." He shouldn't treat Lancelot that harsh, even if he is his servant. You can guess that Shylock takes his anger out on him. Shylock's interactment towards others is not appreciated.
Shylock wants to make sure he will get his bond, no matter what. He won't even let money get in the way. In act 4, scene 1, lines 85-87, Shylock says, "If every ducat in your six thousand ducats were in six parts and every part a ducat, I would not draw them: I would have my bond!" He doesn't want the bond for the flesh, he wants it for revenge. Justice and law even come to play in his fight for the bond. In act 4, scene 1, Lines 99-103, Shylock says, "The pound of flesh which I demand of him is nearly bought, 'tis mine, and I will have it: If you deny me, fie upon your law! There is no force in the decrees of Venice! I stand for judgement." He is so serious that if he doesn't get his bond he will blame Justice. Shylocks strong hatred towards Antonio makes him want the pound of flesh even more.
In this play Shylock reveals himself to be a harsh and relentless Jew unworthy of respect from others. He uses religion to segregate, doesn't show any respect towards others, and is bitter in his attempts of trying to achieve his bond. His actions have caused everyone to turn against him, even his own daughter. In the end Shylock gained nothing from what he has done since the beginning. Antonio decided his future for him. His money will eventually be given to his daughter, Jessica, and Lorenzo after his death. Worst of all, he demanded him to become Christian. Shylock has lost everything he once had. From family, to money, and to property. He is good example of how the five factors can transform your life.
Tuesday, April 29, 2014
Merchant of Venice Literary Analysis: Rough Draft
In the 16th century life was more complicated than it is today. Love, religion, money, justice, and law play key roles in the happiness of those living at the time. In a comedic play taking place in Italy, "Merchant of Venice" by William Shakespeare shows how the five factors can jeopardize how you see others and who you are as a person. Shylock is a Jewish moneylender. In the play he proves himself to be a cruel and relentless Jew unworthy of any respect.
Shylock uses his and other's beliefs as a way to segregate. His treatment towards Christians, specifically Antonio, is often unruly. In act 1, scene 3, lines 143-148, Shylock states, "If you repay me not on such a day, in such a place, such sum or sums as are expressed in the condition, let the forfeit be nominated for an equal pound of your fair flesh, to be cut off and taken in what part of your body pleaseth me." If a non-Christian were to borrow money from Shylock there wouldn't be such an intimidating bond. He really knows how to hold a grudge, especially for Antonio. Shylock uses religion as his excuse for his hatred towards others. In act 2, scene 5, lines 13-15, he says," I am not bid for love: they flatter me. But yet I'll go in hate, to feed upon the prodigal Christian." Even when it's not necessary, he always finds a way to put down Christians. He really is a cruel Jew. Shylock shows harsh racism even when it is not the right time for it.
Shylock hasn't showed any respect for others, therefore, he doesn't deserve any. When Jessica took off with Shylock's money he was more worried about the ducats than losing his daughter. In act 2, scene 8, lines 18-22, Solanio says," A sealed bag, two sealed bags of ducats, of double ducats, stolen from me by my daughter! And jewels- two stones, two rich and precious stones, stolen by my daughter! Justice! Find the girl! She hath the stones upon her, and the ducats!" Even from other's point of views, all he cares about is his money. For a person like him that will never change. He almost treats Lancelot like a slave. In act 2, scene 3, lines 94-96, Lancelot states, " My masters a very Jew; give him a present! give him a halter: I am famished in his service: you may tell every finger I have with my ribs." He shouldn't treat Lancelot that harsh, even if he is his servant. Shylock's interactment towards others is not appreciated.
Shylock wants to make sure he will get his bond, no matter what. He won't even let money get in the way. In act 4, scene 1, lines 85-87, Shylock says, "If every ducat in your six thousand ducats were in six parts and every part a ducat, I would not draw them: I would have my bond!" He doesn't want the bond for the flesh, he wants it for revenge. Justice and law even come to play in his fight for the bond. In act 4, scene 1, Lines 99-103, Shylock says, "The pound of flesh which I demand of him is nearly bought, 'tis mine, and I will have it: If you deny me, fie upon your law! There is no force in the decrees of Venice! I stand for judgement." He is so serious that if he doesn't get his bond he will blame Justice. Shylocks strong hatred towards Antonio makes him want the pound of flesh even more.
In this play Shylock reveals himself to be a harsh and relentless Jew that doesn't deserve respect from others. His actions have caused everyone to turn against him, even his own daughter. He is a good example of how the five factors can change a person completely. None of the factors benefited him in any way. He lost connection with all his money, justice and law didn't work in his favor, and being a Jew wasn't an advantage either. The factors could benefit a person in a good way, but in most cases they don't work cohesively.
Sunday, March 30, 2014
Merchant of Venice pre-reading work
1. Don't rely on outward appearances when making judgements.
Agree. What's on the outside is only one perspecrive. There is still so much to reveal, but it's just hidden. When I was youmger and searching for books I tend to judge how I would like it by looking at the cover. As I get older I learn there is much more than just a picture on the cover.
2. Justice is always blind.
Agree. Life would be alot more fair if people weren't biased on their decisions. People would be treated as equal without discrimination. When having debates in History class, the judges are usually biased to the side they like the best. What they should do is listen to both sides' details and judge by that, not what they prefer.
3. A brotherly love between two friends can be just as strong as an intimate love between a man and a woman.
Disagree. I believe you can love two people, in which you have different relationships with, just as equally, but you can love those two people in different ways. I love my brothers and parents just as equally, but I show it in different ways.
4. You can break a promise as long as you have a good excuse.
Disagree. A promise is given as a guarantee. It doesn't matter how good the excuse is, a promise can never be broken. Before making a promise I always make sure it is something I am willingly and able to fulfill.
5. Love is blind.
Agree. It shouldn't matter what the person looks like. What matters is how they treat you. When knowing who my friends are I only care about how they act towards me. Everyone is equal in my eyes.
6. Stereotypes are often right.
Disagree. Stereotypes do not apply to everyone. It is a way of discriminating people and I don't believe in it. A stereotype for asians is that their parents are always strict when it comes to school, but my parents are the complete opposite. This shows that stereotypes are not always right.
7. An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth is a good motto to live by.
Disagree. People should do things with the kindness of their heart. Those who agree with this motto are very ungrateful. When I help someone with homework I don't expect them to give me something in return, like money. I am just doing what I feel is right
Sheryl and Madison:
1. Being sad can be strange for me. I might not even know what I'm feeling most of the time. Sometimes I can be happy, but the environment im in can set off a different mood. Being sad can send mixed messages. It can turn into anger or being depressed. That's why its so hard to identify what you're feeling. Sadness is a strange, and difficult feeling to identify.
2. Attitudes regarding usary have definitely changed since then. People enjoy lending money for inrerest today. The more money the put in, the interest adds up and results in more money being taken out. Money today is desired by all. Everyone wants more money to live the best life they possibly could. Back then they would disagree with usary. This would be becuase they didn't have enough money or experienced bankruptcy, leading to lose trust in banks. Today, usury is a very common thing.
3. It is not right to lend someone alot of money. In most cases you can't trust everyone with a large amount of money. Especially if you don't know their background. Some people will go to extreme measures just for money. It puts everyone else at risk. You should never lend someone a lot of money without knowing who they really are.
4. I don't expect these elements to blend well. Ethnic and religion are two topics that people see from many perspectives. In most cases people don't agree with others. Disagreements could cause conflict even with the people you love. It isn't something that should be played around with.
Agree. What's on the outside is only one perspecrive. There is still so much to reveal, but it's just hidden. When I was youmger and searching for books I tend to judge how I would like it by looking at the cover. As I get older I learn there is much more than just a picture on the cover.
2. Justice is always blind.
Agree. Life would be alot more fair if people weren't biased on their decisions. People would be treated as equal without discrimination. When having debates in History class, the judges are usually biased to the side they like the best. What they should do is listen to both sides' details and judge by that, not what they prefer.
3. A brotherly love between two friends can be just as strong as an intimate love between a man and a woman.
Disagree. I believe you can love two people, in which you have different relationships with, just as equally, but you can love those two people in different ways. I love my brothers and parents just as equally, but I show it in different ways.
4. You can break a promise as long as you have a good excuse.
Disagree. A promise is given as a guarantee. It doesn't matter how good the excuse is, a promise can never be broken. Before making a promise I always make sure it is something I am willingly and able to fulfill.
5. Love is blind.
Agree. It shouldn't matter what the person looks like. What matters is how they treat you. When knowing who my friends are I only care about how they act towards me. Everyone is equal in my eyes.
6. Stereotypes are often right.
Disagree. Stereotypes do not apply to everyone. It is a way of discriminating people and I don't believe in it. A stereotype for asians is that their parents are always strict when it comes to school, but my parents are the complete opposite. This shows that stereotypes are not always right.
7. An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth is a good motto to live by.
Disagree. People should do things with the kindness of their heart. Those who agree with this motto are very ungrateful. When I help someone with homework I don't expect them to give me something in return, like money. I am just doing what I feel is right
Sheryl and Madison:
1. Being sad can be strange for me. I might not even know what I'm feeling most of the time. Sometimes I can be happy, but the environment im in can set off a different mood. Being sad can send mixed messages. It can turn into anger or being depressed. That's why its so hard to identify what you're feeling. Sadness is a strange, and difficult feeling to identify.
2. Attitudes regarding usary have definitely changed since then. People enjoy lending money for inrerest today. The more money the put in, the interest adds up and results in more money being taken out. Money today is desired by all. Everyone wants more money to live the best life they possibly could. Back then they would disagree with usary. This would be becuase they didn't have enough money or experienced bankruptcy, leading to lose trust in banks. Today, usury is a very common thing.
3. It is not right to lend someone alot of money. In most cases you can't trust everyone with a large amount of money. Especially if you don't know their background. Some people will go to extreme measures just for money. It puts everyone else at risk. You should never lend someone a lot of money without knowing who they really are.
4. I don't expect these elements to blend well. Ethnic and religion are two topics that people see from many perspectives. In most cases people don't agree with others. Disagreements could cause conflict even with the people you love. It isn't something that should be played around with.
Thursday, March 6, 2014
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Monday, February 3, 2014
I am a Computer (FINAL)
I am a Computer
Intelligent, I will always find a solution
Endless amounts of knowledge
Rest in my fingertips
Versatile, convenient, and advanced is my definition
I am a Computer
There is no doubt that
I am needed in everyday life
I am the solution
To all of your questions
I am a Computer
I am a Computer
Never underestimate my possibilities
With every click
There is more and more to reveal
But it takes time and effort
For me to show them
I am a computer
Be careful how you treat me
One careless move
I am broken
Sometimes without hope of being restored
Being sensitive to the littlest things makes me a fragile person
Being sensitive to the littlest things makes me a fragile person
I am a computer
When used right
I am a joy to have
But when abused
I will show you my wrath
Don't be fooled by how gentle and nice I may seem
For I will show my true colors when forced
I am a computer
Complicated
I am hard to figure out
Most people give up after the first try
and never give enough effort
This causes me to start losing hope
Don't be fooled by how gentle and nice I may seem
For I will show my true colors when forced
I am a computer
Complicated
I am hard to figure out
Most people give up after the first try
and never give enough effort
This causes me to start losing hope
I will reach a point
Where nothing can fix the damage
That has been done
I am a computer
Take care of me
Friday, January 31, 2014
I am a Computer (DRAFT)
I am
a Computer
Intelligent,
I will always find a solution
Endless
amounts of knowledge
Rest
in my fingertips
Versatile,
convenient, and advanced is my definition
I am
a Computer
There
is no doubt that
I am
needed in everyday life
I am
the solution
To
all of your questions
Never
underestimate my possibilities
With
every click
There
is more and more to reveal
But
it takes time and effort
For
me to show them
I am
a computer
Be
careful how you treat me
One
careless move
I am
broken
Sometimes
without hope of being restored
I am
a computer
When
used right
I am
a joy to have
But
when abused
I
will show you my wrath
With continuous efforts of getting me fixed,
I
will reach a point
Where
nothing can fix the damage
That
has been done
I am
a computer
Take
care of me
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