Very interesting and it gets you thinking..the only thing I think you can do to make it better is by making your font more appealing.
I think its really nice, the only thing I think you can do is maybe add something so the audience knows what your alluding to.
I really like it! I think if you incorporate yourself into it, it should make it really good. Also maybe make the background more relevant to the story your alluding to so you kinda get who you're supposed to be.
Very interesting and it gets you thinking..the only thing I think you can do to make it better is by making your font more appealing.
ReplyDeleteI think its really nice, the only thing I think you can do is maybe add something so the audience knows what your alluding to.
ReplyDeleteI really like it! I think if you incorporate yourself into it, it should make it really good. Also maybe make the background more relevant to the story your alluding to so you kinda get who you're supposed to be.
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